Haiku 20131003

20131003Poctober
pumpkins showing up,
persimmons too, soon

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2 thoughts on “Haiku 20131003

  1. I absolutely love the loaded function of that final comma–an Oxford necessity in setting off the too, but also an all-important pause, loading the gun of that ultimate explosion of doubled meaning of ” too soon” and the curtailed soon. Words are failing me, and that’s as it should be. The picture and the sentiment made my day.

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