First one cheesy but only because of the music. Second one far from cheesy – I love it. I studied electronic music for my degree. This is an amazing demonstration of how emotion in a movie can be changed by altering the soundtrack.
I love this. I had a similar idea and now you’ve inspired me to follow through with creating a “video diary” of my poetry. Thanks, so glad I ran across your blog. Please be sure to visit my poetry blog at http://marchthirtyone.wordpress.com
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That’s correct, Fred. Most, virtually all, modern English-language haiku eschew the 5-7-5 limitation, mostly because the Japanese “on” is not an equivalent of the English syllable. This fellow goes into the whole thing in some detail: https://youtu.be/Zf4CSYgsfhw?si=S4HoeVhne3ZdW-si
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First one cheesy but only because of the music. Second one far from cheesy – I love it. I studied electronic music for my degree. This is an amazing demonstration of how emotion in a movie can be changed by altering the soundtrack.
Cool, thanks for the input!
I love this. I had a similar idea and now you’ve inspired me to follow through with creating a “video diary” of my poetry. Thanks, so glad I ran across your blog. Please be sure to visit my poetry blog at http://marchthirtyone.wordpress.com
What a great idea!
I just wanted to take the time and tell you that I nominated you for the Versatile Blogger Award! Your posts, articles, and creative voice truly speak volumes. You always bring a smile to my face and your posts always seem to resonate with a beautiful authenticity. See your nomination here: http://completehealthcircle.com/2013/10/30/versatile-blogger-nomination/
Thanks!
I love the idea, but some of these that I am seeing don’t seem to have the Haiku pattern of 5,7,5.
That’s correct, Fred. Most, virtually all, modern English-language haiku eschew the 5-7-5 limitation, mostly because the Japanese “on” is not an equivalent of the English syllable. This fellow goes into the whole thing in some detail: https://youtu.be/Zf4CSYgsfhw?si=S4HoeVhne3ZdW-si