20140413Pold telephone pole
every rusty staple
has its story

2 thoughts on “haiku 20140413

  1. Well known haiku poet Alan Pizzarelli published a somewhat similar haiku years ago. I recently found it again while thumbing through “The Haiku Anthology” by Cor van den Heuvel, 3rd edition, pg. 155.

    twilight
    staples rust
    in the telephone pole

    I like yours better!

    Ron

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