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Classic haiku! Would be impossible to find anything about it that could be improved. Thank you for showing us how it’s done. Ron Reply
This one is absolutely perfect. Just a beautiful description of something I’ve seen a million times – now made very special. Great work! Reply
Classic haiku! Would be impossible to find anything about it that could be improved. Thank you for showing us how it’s done.
Ron
This one is absolutely perfect. Just a beautiful description of something I’ve seen a million times – now made very special. Great work!
Exquisite–immediately calls to mind the scene you describe.