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haiku 20140206

20140206Pveins of rain
pulsing across the glass
my thoughts elsewhere

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3 comments on “haiku 20140206

  1. pi314chron
    February 6, 2014

    Classic haiku! Would be impossible to find anything about it that could be improved. Thank you for showing us how it’s done.

    Ron

  2. Blackbird
    February 6, 2014

    This one is absolutely perfect. Just a beautiful description of something I’ve seen a million times – now made very special. Great work!

  3. donnaanddiablo
    February 7, 2014

    Exquisite–immediately calls to mind the scene you describe.

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