veins of rain
pulsing across the glass
my thoughts elsewhere
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Classic haiku! Would be impossible to find anything about it that could be improved. Thank you for showing us how it’s done.
Ron
This one is absolutely perfect. Just a beautiful description of something I’ve seen a million times – now made very special. Great work!
Exquisite–immediately calls to mind the scene you describe.