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Haiku 20130315

20130315Pyesterday’s fog
dissipated —
going home today

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4 comments on “Haiku 20130315

  1. ginabeab
    March 18, 2013

    My reaction to the haiku here has been to wonder why the lines do not follow 7,5,7.

    • haikuandy
      March 18, 2013

      Surely you mean 5-7-5. That said, it’s optional. If you open most modern English-language haiku journals, you will see a lack of 5-7-5. If you are really curious, google “Jane Reichhold”. She’s written a great deal about modern English-language haiku, including this topic, quite extensively.

  2. Adriana Dascalu
    March 18, 2013

    Lovely, Andy! An eloquent image creating a strong feeling of conscience, of coming back! I like it!

    • haikuandy
      March 18, 2013

      Thank you, Adriana! And it’s good to be out among the healthy again!

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